The time has (finally) come. We have finished and polished a complete and cohesive first draft of The Last Princess, and it comes out to just over 65,000 words. This is slightly long for typical middle grade books, but allowances are usually made for fantasy books.
In case you’re not familiar with my daughter’s and my WIP, here is a brief description:
Cat Brökkenwier has a secret — the ability to see that the descendents of faeries and elves and ogres still walk among us. With the help of an ancient diary she learns she may be the last princess of all the fae. Now Cat must learn all there is to know about the secret world of the fae-born and earn the crown before another, more sinister candidate beats her to it. Or worse, before her mother finds out.
But before we start sending this out to agents, we need feedback from readers like you. Obviously we want this to be the best book it can be, and to make this happen we need to know what people who read think of it.
When you sign up below (or above via the Beta Reader Sign Up tab) we will send you the complete manuscript plus a few questions. These are easy questions; we certainly don’t expect you to write an in-depth page-by-page analysis. We just want to know if there are any major issue or rough spots that need to be smoothed. Of course, we also want to know what you particularly liked. So you know what you’re signing up for, here are the questions we’re asking:
1) Did you enjoy The Last Princess? Would you buy the sequel if there was one?
2) Was the language easy to follow and enjoyable to read? Did you have difficulty with characters’ accents?
4) Were you able to identify with the characters and did you find them interesting? In what way?
3) Were you able to “see” the locations? Did you feel they were overdescribed? Underdescribed?
4) Did the story make sense? Was there any point when you were confused? Please explain.
5) Was any part of the story boring? Was there any point or any characters that you did not like? Why?
6) Were you satisfied with the ending? Were you surprised? Were you expecting something different?
7) Were there any loose ends that we did not tie up for you? (Obviously, some things were left up in the air for a possible sequel).
8) Do you have any questions for us?
If this book appeals to you and these questions don’t seem too daunting, we’d be delighted to share our manuscript with you. Please provide your contact information, your real name (in case we wish to acknowledge you in print), the kinds of books you typically read, and when you think you will be able to get back to us with your answers. Then get ready for an adventure (we hope!)
Thank you in advance!